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flemmings ([personal profile] flemmings) wrote2008-04-03 10:18 pm
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Things that never happened in Wu. 

They come to Wu. The king and queen travel in a carriage, his generals walk. The king and queen are installed in a small house by the palace stables with two slaves to see to their needs. The generals are lodged in a run-down and well-guarded barracks some distance from the city walls. Every evening Gou Jian waits on the King: attends on his dinner, standing by the table; accompanies him on his constitutional walk afterwards through the palace gardens; then, for an hour or so, plays a game of chess with him. When Fu Chai summons his waiting women to disrobe him and prepare him for bed, Gou Jian is dismissed and escorted back to his little cottage.

      Fu Chai observes Gou Jian's strategy during the game but draws no conclusions from it. Sometimes he's rash out of all measure, playing with a kind of savage violence; sometimes he's slow and cautious, goading Fu Chai into an impatience that often leads to mistakes and lost games; and sometimes he's absent-minded and indifferent, as though the game and his opponent and the circumstances he finds himself mean nothing to him at all.

      "We bore you," Fu Chai remarks.

      Gou Jian looks up in surprise.

      "No. Why do you say that?"

      "Your mind isn't on the game."

      Gou Jian shakes his head.

      "I can see I'm not going to win this time."

      "How so?"

      "I can't read your moves. They make no sense." There's a pause. Gou Jian makes an abrupt gesture and his sleeve sends the stones flying from the board. Fu Chai's eyes narrow. Then he laughs.

      "Brilliant! When the game goes against you, refuse to play the game!"

      Gou Jian gives him an unreadable look. "Is one allowed to refuse?"

      "Yes. Of course. What do you think I'm doing now?"

      "Playing with Us," Gou Jian says.

      "Playing chess with you," Fu Chai corrects him. "Reset the stones."

       Gou Jian makes no move to obey.

        "Think," Fu Chai tells him. "You attacked Our kingdom, We defeated your kingdom. All that remained after that was to offer your head to my father's spirit, tear down your country's temple and scatter your ancestors' bones, and take all that's yours for my own. Wu Zi Xu's still at me, day and night, to do it. And I don't."

        "Why not?"

       
"Why don't I do what anyone else would do? Why do you think?"
   
        "Because you issued a proclamation before the king of Zhou promising to keep me alive. And you did that because it was the only way to get my surrender." His fingers tap the board. "And you wanted my surrender, not my death, because-" He pauses, picks up a white stone and puts it on the board, picks up another and places it deliberately, as if unaware of Fu Chai's tight-lipped silence three feet away- "you want to show Wu Zi Xu that you can do something he never could." Three stones, four. "Whatever he wants from you, you'll do the opposite, until he finally accepts that you're the master."

         "You think that?" Fu Chai lets out a disgusted breath.


        "That's not the reason?" Gou Jian looks up.

        "The reason is that I refuse to loose Wu Zi Xu on Yue the way my father loosed him on Chu. I won't let him do in your kingdom what he did in his own. And for that I think you owe me some thanks, king of Yue!
"

        
Gou Jian's face is still. He inclines his head gravely. "My thanks, king of Wu." Fu Chai stares at him, all the things he wants to say and the things he wants to hear a confused whirling in his head.

        "Shall your servant set the black stones for the Great Lord?" Gou Jian says.

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Ohhhh! *Ahhh Love!* - well sort of!

^__^

Lovely !

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 11:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. (Now where do we go from here...?)
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[personal profile] incandescens 2008-04-04 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
Things that we wish could have happened in Wu . . .

Thank you!

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
Increasingly so as the series progresses. My dislike of the 20s episodes is so violent I may rewrite everyone in them out of all recognition, and have Wu Zi Xu die of the plague while I'm at it.

You're welcome.

[identity profile] feliciter.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
Much love and gratitude for these what-if vignettes ^_^

I wonder, to what extent would Fu Chai allow (or want) Gou Jian to be homest with him? For that matter, how honest is this Fu Chai with himself?

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 11:51 am (UTC)(link)
Fu Chai is walking in the dark and feeling his way as he goes. He doesn't know what he wants from Gou Jian. He knows what he doesn't want, which is Gou Jian dead, and he knows it's his version of 不服, will-not-accept the way it is. Anything else he discovers will probably take him by surprise, and then I must decide if my Fu Chai is going to be the generous and open-hearted Fu Chai of the early series, or the self-regarding and fundamentally limited Fu Chai of the mid-series, or late Fu Chai who can change his style at need. Wich one he is will decide whether he wants Gou Jian to be honest or prefers to play emotional chess with him forever.

This is all quite apart from how honest Gou Jian can be, or is willing to be.

[identity profile] feliciter.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 12:14 pm (UTC)(link)
It might be a tad difficult for Fu Chai to remain open-hearted (though it would probably be otherwise for his eyes and mind) - those chess games must surely influence how he acts/reacts to other than the man across the board.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 01:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Rewatching the series suggests to me that what really makes Fu Chai truly vicious is success. He's bad enough before Gou Jian walks off the cliff; after that and his 'I'm tired of this- I don't need your submission', he's impossible. Even though he screws up his foray into Xi is it? he's all 'mighty king' bumptious nasty- the insecure man who's had his self-worth affirmed and feels free to bully in consequence.

We're supposed to believe that Xi Shi humanizes him, but it's a bit late for that. Better for him to be kept off-balance from the start by having something that doesn't submit to him, and that he's afraid to break in order to make it submit, for reasons he doesn't know himself. I see the chess games as his way of approaching the enigma that is Gou Jian, this unknowable and unreadable phenomenon who possesses something Fu Chai doesn't, though Fu Chai doesn't know what it is. Much as he's intrigued by this quality and wants to understand it- and may want to have it himself because he thinks it'd be useful- I don't think Fu Chai will ever be able to think like Gou Jian.

Though he might try, especially with WZX.

[identity profile] mvrdrk.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't gotten that far, waah! To episode 13, at least, Fucha isn't bad, just aimless and directionless from what I can tell. It's clearly starting to go bad already with the disgusting WZX ...

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
Fu Chai shows a certain decency in the early days before he becomes king. But it goes to hell in a handbasket when the Crown Prince dies and he finds that he actually has a chance at the throne. So he's no longer trying just to distinguish himself from the rest of the royal princes by outstanding deeds and coups- he gets to be king, then he defeats Yue when it goes to war against him, then he can grab the hegemony from Jin and be first under Zhou; and possibly he has plans to bring down Zhou and be the greatest power there is. 'All power tends to corrupt', basically.

WZX is disgusting, yes. He stops at nothing to get what he wants. The trouble is that he's immensely able and clear-sighted and not in the least venal: what he wants (whether revenge on Chu earlier or Gou Jian's death now) will indeed make Wu a strong country. But he's disgusting in the ways he goes about it.

[identity profile] mvrdrk.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
So far, which is not very, WZX's biggest sin is making the king a puppet rather than exposing him to everything and trying to teach him. The best way to get a bad ruler is take someone who has potential, wrap them up in swaddling so they never get to learn or do, and feed them misinformation. He doesn't have Wu's best interests in mind, he only thinks he does.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 12:56 pm (UTC)(link)
In fairness, there seems to be an idea current at the time that /study/ is what makes a good king and a good minister. All these Fan Lis and Wen Zhongs have nothing to recommend them to be king's advisors except a good education (which always makes me boggle when these theoreticians are put in authority over generals with experience in the field.) WZX thinks Fu Chai should study the manuals of tactics and then when he's older and wiser and blah-blah he can try his hand at war, after seeing how WZX does it ie the right way. The hands-on 'let him make mistakes' approach is not encouraged, from all I can see.

I'm sure age has something to do with it. WZX thinks Fu Chai is simply too young to be given free rein. The disinformation (and keeping all the memorials in his own hands) still makes me raise my eyebrows. Maybe WZX is doing a Shi Mai here: conveniently not seeing that his policy (whether 'educating' Fu Chai or promoting a young boy to be king) has the practical effect of keeping or putting all real power into his own hands.

[identity profile] rasetsunyo.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Most enjoyable!

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!