mikeneko says Finished is better than Good. This one is Finished too and she's welcome to it. The only respectable bit is the opening section because that's practically a word for word rendition of one of
tammylee's marvellous dreams. I'm sorry I couldn't do better with it; and sorry too that this turned out to be, in the end, so very western a story where All Must Be Explained.
The Children of the StormUtterly gen, FWIW, with only minor appearances by the Iijimas.