mikeneko says Finished is better than Good. This one is Finished too and she's welcome to it. The only respectable bit is the opening section because that's practically a word for word rendition of one of
tammylee's marvellous dreams. I'm sorry I couldn't do better with it; and sorry too that this turned out to be, in the end, so very western a story where All Must Be Explained.
The Children of the StormUtterly gen, FWIW, with only minor appearances by the Iijimas.
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I read "Children's Palace" and thought "Wait, doesn't that mean...?" Yep.
You got the impression you wanted. When I finished, I duly thought "WTF?" went back, read it through, and said "Ah." With a few "ooohs" thrown in.
Magnificent story, VERY chilling.
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