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flemmings ([personal profile] flemmings) wrote2007-02-14 08:34 am
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Yes I am posting an elegy on Valentine's Day. Liebestod: deal. I'd have posted it Monday but someone mistakenly walked off with the backpack the (newly purchased) book was in and I thought it gone for good. Along with my credit cards and other stuff. But now I have my backpack back I'm putting this poem here for safe-keeping, because I've waited over ten years to have it in my possession.

For W.H. Auden

    Now I am surer where they were going,
The brakie loping the tops of the moving freight,
The beautiful girls in their outboard, waving to someone
As the stern dug in and the wake pleated the water,

    The uniformed children led by a nun
Through the terminal's uproar, the clew-drawn scholar descending
The cast-iron stairs of the stacks, shuffling his papers,
The Indians, two to a blanket, passing in darkness,

    Also the German prisoner switching
His dusty neck as the truck backfired and started--
Of all these noted in stride and detained in memory
I now know better that they were going to die,

    Since you, who sustained the civil tongue
In a scattering time, and were poet of all our cities,
Have for all your clever difference quietly left us,
As we might have known that you would, by that common door.

First read this in Wilbur's New and Collected Poems in Kinokuniya in Tokyo a dozen years back. Hardcover, English book, appalling exchange rate- cost about $60 and I couldn't afford it. Found it over here when I came back for half that but still couldn't afford it. Found the paperback on Monday and now I have it, and the poem is here.
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[personal profile] incandescens 2007-02-14 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm going to be quotefiling that one.

[identity profile] tammylee.livejournal.com 2007-02-14 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely.

*claps*

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2007-02-14 03:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my, I love poetry; and this is wonderful.

Thank you for sharing.
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[personal profile] stormcloude 2007-02-14 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Rather a depressing elegy in some respects. I'm glad you got your things back.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-02-14 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Mh? Depressing? How so?
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[personal profile] stormcloude 2007-02-14 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I guess in the reminder that everyone is heading towards death? I like the stanza about Auden and the common door though.

(I'm not the best at analyzing poetry and no disrespect is intended. It's an... appropriate elegy. It just struck me as somewhat bleak.)

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2007-02-14 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Mh, well. That's kind of the point about /anyone's/ death, though, isn't it? You can't go 'He's dead and it's so sad but at least I'm immortal' cause you aren't. I find the common door thing rather heartening, actually. Everyone goes through it, including WH Auden.