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flemmings ([personal profile] flemmings) wrote2006-11-23 10:23 am
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Awakenings- another chapter

Ficbit. Addition to this. Not worksafe.

Something small and hard slips inside him and he comes suddenly awake. Weight on his pelvis-- someone atop him, heavy buttocks pressing on him just *there*. Hands on his chest, hard gripping hands, clever fingers touching him just *there*. He moans unthinkingly, deep in his belly. Something pushes, light but steady, at the base of his body, and the groaning inside grows stronger. He wants to go- he needs to go- he yearns for the touch on his shaft, for the grasping fingers that speed him into oblivion, and they come- and he goes- as Hakkai shifts easily into third.

Entirely [livejournal.com profile] cherise75's fault, of course.

[identity profile] daegaer.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Love!

you were saying???

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
and I was just saying I wanted an mjj fic.

Hooray for wishes coming true! Gaiden is love, and Tenpou is sex, in glasses and uniform. and

zan is DED from revising fangirling!

must go to sleep it will be 2 am soon! and I have to hand in some past papers which I'm supposed to have done by tomorrow, Oups! today!!!
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[personal profile] incandescens 2006-11-23 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
An excellent way to end the day. ;)

[identity profile] unearthly-calm.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*groans*

[identity profile] xsmoonshine.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Wahahaha! A most wonderful awakening.

[identity profile] tekalynn.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*rimshot*

Great POV! And way to set up the reader.

[identity profile] new-kate.livejournal.com 2006-11-23 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah, right *there*. Wonderful.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
Correct.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
Aaahhh! Icon love!

[identity profile] cherise75.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
OMG!!! *hides head* LMAO It's all my fault!?! Well, I'm glad to have inspired such a yummy ficbit. Thanks for sharing!!!

[identity profile] kickinpants.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha, that is awesome. And thank you for providing the impetus. That helped circle it around nicely. :D

[identity profile] mvrdrk.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that was wonderful!

[identity profile] mauvecloud.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
Ignore the Not Worksafe label at one's peril!

*giggles* Shaft, indeed.

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 02:16 pm (UTC)(link)
(Thank you, all.)

'The careful hands that guide his accelerating passion and the firm grip on his knobbed stick...' If it hadn't been a drabble and if I knew anything at all about cars it could have gone on forever. 'His racing desires went into high gear as he shook and strained. Everything within him knocked about in confusion. From somewhere far away he seemed to hear cursewords and yelling. It took a moment to realize they were coming out of himself.' (I believe the springs on a jeep are inferior to those of most passenger vehicles. Correct me if I'm wrong.)

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the idea. That plotbunny gnawed my shins till I wrote it. If you have any other unconsidered double entendres hanging about, send 'em on over. ^_^

[identity profile] cherise75.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL Okies, I'll do just that. ^_^

[identity profile] baka-gaijin.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
~ fic love and icon love ~

[identity profile] flemmings.livejournal.com 2006-11-28 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. The icon is the work of the lovely and talented [livejournal.com profile] xsmoonshine.